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请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
“When I can’t answer the questions in the exam, I sometimes cheat to get high scores.”
要求:(1)就此材料发表你的看法;
(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;
(3)词数不少于60;
(4)在答题卡上作答。
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答案:Nowadays, it is not unusual to see some students cheat in the exam to get better grades, which has aroused great concern in society.
The reason why students cheat in the exam is that they want to harvest success without hard work. In my opinion, it is shameful to cheat in the exam because it not only goes against honesty but also breaks the rules of schools. Students should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in examinations.  What's more, they should find ways to make study interesting and efficient.
Only when students realize the importance of study can they improve their study methods and achieve success finally.
试题分析:题目要求结合所给材料写一篇英语短文,材料的意思是:当我考试遇到不会做的题目时,我有时会通过作弊来获得高分。写作要求包括:发表自己的看法;紧扣材料并有明确的观点。词数不少于60词;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:范文涵盖了所有的写作要点,进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句的连贯性;范文还使用了非限制性定语从句、定语从句、表语从句、倒装等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:非限制性定语从句which has aroused great concern in society;定语从句why students cheat in the exam;表语从句that they want to harvest success without hard work;原因状语从句because it not only goes against honesty but also breaks the rules of schools;倒装句Only when students realize the importance of study can they improve their study methods and achieve success finally.等,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用nowadays, in my opinion, and, what's more等来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得更有条理;
短语和搭配方面:范文使用了not only...but also, want to, go against, try to, instead of等短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实。
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