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本学期,合肥一中开设了“七彩课程”,二外课是“七彩课程”的重要组成部分,即在语言课上为学生提供学习除英语以外的第二门外语如俄语、法语等语言的机会,对此大家有不同的看法。英语社就此事开展了一场讨论。请你谈谈对设置此类课程的看法并说明理由。
注意: 1. 词数120左右;
2. 参考词汇: 七彩课程Colorful Course;开设establish vt.
                                                                      
                                                                      
                                                                      
答案:As we all know, our school, since the beginning of this term, Hefei High School has established Colorful Course, of which the second-language classes are an important part. Apart from studying English, students are offered access to other language such as Russian, French and so on. People have various views about the Colorful Course. Some think that the second-language classes will not only develop students’ interest in language, but also help them enrich their school life. While others hold that the Colorful Course can take up their precious time which may have a bad effect on their learning.
As far as I’m concerned, the Colorful Course will widen our eyesight, making us learn more about other culture. As long as we make full use of our time, we can have wonderful learning experiences.
试题分析:
题目要求写一篇短文,谈谈你对设置七彩课程的看法并说明理由。七彩课程就是为学生提供学习第二门外语的机会。词数在120左右;注意使用参考词汇;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:
范文注意语句的连贯性并进行了适当的拓展;范文还使用了定语从句、非谓语动词、条件句等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:非限制性定语从句As we all know;定语从句①of which the second-language classes are an important part,②which may have a bad effect on their learning;宾语从句①that the second-language classes will not only develop students’ interest,②hold that the Colorful Course can take up their precious time;非谓语动词making us learn more about other culture;条件句As long as we make full use of our time等,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文的句式变得丰富多样;
篇章结构方面:范文使用了not only...but also, as far as I’m concerned等来衔接句子和段落,使作文联系紧密,表达变得更有条理;
搭配方面:范文使用了apart from, access to, such as, and so on等短语,使作文的内容变得充实,句意也更加连贯。
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