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请根据以下提示,写一篇英语日记。
6月15号,星期六。天气晴朗。你在家里做完作业后,决定去电影院看电影。正要到电影院的时候,你突然发现一位外国人,站在路边非常焦急。于是,你走上去问出了什么事。可彼此都听不懂对方说的话。最后,你们依靠身体语言才知道对方的意思。原来这位外国人想去人民公园。于是你叫了辆出租车,并告诉司机他要到哪里。然后,你就去了电影院。
要求:1. 格式正确,文章通顺。2. 词数:100左右。
June 15, 2014, Saturday                         Fine
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答案:June 15, 2010, Saturday                         Fine
This morning, after I finished my homework, I decided to go to the cinema to see a film. I was about to arrive at the cinema when I found a foreigner standing on the side of the road, looking nervous. Then I came up to him to see what was the matter with him. However, neither of us could understand each other. At last we both made ourselves understood with the help of body language. The foreigner wanted to go to the People’s Park. I stopped a taxi and told the driver to drive the foreigner to the People’s Park. Then I went to the cinema and enjoyed myself there.
试题分析:本次作文是篇日记,故基本时态为一般过去时。题目对于写作内容的提示详尽,学生只需要条理清楚、用语正确地将整个事情描述清楚。
亮点说明:该范文基本时态为一般过去时,符合日记体裁的时态要求。整篇文章按照时间的顺序完整地将整个事情展现在读者面前。介词和副词的合理使用,使得文章的时间脉络清晰。且作者正确地运用了find和make的复合结构“found a foreigner standing on the side of the road”,“made ourselves understood”,此外非谓语“looking nervous”的准确运用,也使得文章增色不少!