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请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
According to some surveys, when students need to finish some tasks, they like to find the answers, only depending on the internet instead of their own creative thinking.
要求 (1)就此材料发表你的看法;
(2)紧扣材料,有明确的观点;
(3)词数不少于60;
(4)在答题卡上作答。
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
                                                                                  
答案:As can be seen in the material, nowadays, students tend to make use of the Internet to gain information they need. Students find it convenient to surf the Internet for useful information. As a result, it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying, which is not beneficial to their own thinking. So measures must be taken to solve the problem. Firstly, it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves and their abilities while doing tasks. Besides, what teachers and parents should do is encourage students to be creative. Finally, doing tasks independently is of great significance.
试题分析:题目要求结合所给材料写一篇英语短文。材料的意思是学生们喜欢从网上查找答案,而不是进行独立思考。写作要求包括:发表自己的看法;紧扣材料并有明确的观点。词数不少于60词;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:范文涵盖了所有的写作要点,进行了适当的拓展,并注意语句的连贯性;范文还使用了非限制性定语从句、主语从句、固定句型等语法知识,具备较强的语言运用能力。
语法方面:非限制性定语从句①As can be seen in the material,②which is not beneficial to their own thinking;定语从句they need;固定句型it’s likely that students will lose interest in studying;主语从句①it is vital that students gain confidence in themselves,②what teachers and parents should do等,语法知识运用娴熟,显示了较强的语法功底,也使作文句式变得多样;
篇章结构方面:范文注意使用nowadays, as a result, so, firstly, besides, finally等来衔接句子和段落,使表达变得更有条理;
短语和搭配方面:范文使用了tend to do, make use of, take measures, of great significance等短语和搭配,使作文的内容变得充实。
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