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请你给外籍教师David Hill写一封信,内容包括:
1你班计划于11月14日(星期五)下午4:00-5:30举行一场英语演讲比赛
2邀请他担任评委,并请他于当天下午3:45到达306教室;
3期待他能应邀前来,并为占用他的休息时间表达歉意。
注意:1词数不少于50;
2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Mr. Hill’
                                                                      
                                                                      
                                                                      
Kind Regards
Anthony
答案:One possible version:
Dear Mr Hill,
We would like to invite you to be a judge at an English speech competition. The event will take place between 4:00pm and 5:30pm on Friday 14th November. We apologise for this being at this time, but due to our busy schedule it was the only time available. If you are able to attend, please arrive at 3:45pm on the day.
We are looking forward to your reply.
Kind Regards,
Anthony Westo
试题分析:本篇书面表达要求给外籍教师David Hill写一封信,内容包括:1你班计划于11月14日(星期五)下午4:00-5:30举行一场英语演讲比赛:2邀请他担任评委,并请他于当天下午3:45到达306教室; 3期待他能应邀前来,并为占用他的休息时间表达歉意等三方面内容。在写作时要注意使用一般将来时,使用第一人称。在语言上要求简洁明了,礼貌委婉。可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,此外,还要注意拼写和标点符号的正确使用和词数要求。
【亮点说明】本篇范文格式规范,要点全面,内容连贯,语言通顺流畅。作者开门见山提出写信的目的,然后告知演讲比赛的时间,最后用简练的语言We are looking forward to your reply提出自己的期待之情。本文最大的亮点是短语的使用,比如:take place; the time available ; due to ,invite sb to do ,look forward to 等。状语从句If you are able to attend,和并列句but due to our busy schedule it was the only time available.的使用也丰富了文章的句式。
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