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作文:(A)5分 老师如何评价我。转述各科老师对你的评价,至少五句话。
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
                                                                             
答案:At the end of this semester, many teachers made some judgments on me. Here were some of comments from my teachers. My English teacher said that I could do well in English if I worked hard in the last term. My math teacher said that I did a good job and he encouraged me to work harder in next term. Also, My Chinese teacher told me that I should do some more reading to improve my writing ability. My chemistry teacher was so kind that he said that I was a hard-working boy. While, my history teacher reminded me that I should make much more efforts in this subject if I wanted to get a high mark.
试题分析:这篇小作文主要注意两个方面。第一个方面,主语应该采用第三人称;第二方面,短文时态采用一般过去时。写作中要注意每一句的表达,适当使用连词。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如: I could do well in English我能学好英语无规矩不成方圆;make much more efforts多多努力。创造浓厚的叙述氛围等,学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
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