- 试题详情及答案解析
- 第二节 读写任务(共l小题, 满分25分)
阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
Latest statistics from the Ministry of Health showed that the incidence rate of kidney cancer increased on average by 2.5 percent annually, with men aged 55 to 65 at particular risk. “It has now become the 10th most common cancer type among men and will be on the rise in the future,”said Ma Jianhui, a leading doctor at the Department of Urological Surgical Oncology of the Cancer Institute and Hospital, Chinese Academy of Medical Sciences.
Chinese senior cancer specialists warned the public that rising kidney cancer, one of the major health problems in China in recent years, is largely due to an unhealthy lifestyle associated with obesity, smoking and drinking. Lack of healthy diet is also one of the major causes.
Though many people already know their unhealthy ways, they keep on doing it. “I smoke because I work in sales and it helps me cope with the stress of meeting targets,” said Wu, after she smoked inside a public restaurant. “I know it is bad for me and I’m trying to quit, but I’m still very healthy now, and I’m optimistic about my future.”
【写作内容】
1. 以约30个词概括短文的要点；
2. 以约120个词就“生活方式与健康”谈谈你的看法，并包含以下内容：
（1）列举你周围的不健康的生活方式；
（2）这些生活方式带来了的影响；
（3）推荐你所知的健康的生活方式。
【写作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。
- 答案：According to statistics, kidney cancer has become a rising caner type, which, in the opinion of Chinese senior specialists, largely results from people's unhealthy lifestyles. However, many people still stick to unhealthy habits like smoking.
Unluckily, around me, it is not unusual to see some people live unhealthy lifestyles. They are accustomed to staying in bed when the alarm clock has gone off so that they can’t have breakfast before study or work. In their spare time, they always keep the remote control in their hands, spending a lot of time watching TV. What's more, they seldom go out and do exercise.
However, such lifestyles do great harm to them. Unhealthy habits weak immune system, so that they are more likely to suffer from various ilinesses, which make them weaker and weaker. In addition, it is easier for them to feel anxious and depressed occasionally. As a result, they can hardly concentrate on their study or work and not able to interact with others very well.
Thus, it is important to maintain a healthy lifestyle. In my opinion, first of all, we should change our bad habits. Meanwhiie, we’d better do exercise regularly and keep a healthy diet. Finally, we ought to arouse the awareness of the importance of health. Only by combining measures with the improved awareness can we live a healthy life. - 试题分析：根据提示1：用约30个词概括短文的要点，需要考生能够读懂所给的原文，文中的复杂句子结构能够理解，要用最简短的语言概括短文大意，不能抓住细节铺开来写，那样字数就会超过了，只需要介绍肾癌逐渐成为一种癌症病类型主要由于人们不健康的生活方式引起，可还是有人坚持着如抽烟那样的坏习惯。
提示2：用约120个词就“生活方式与健康”谈谈你的看法，考生要结合身边不健康的生活方式及其影响发表自己的观点并且向大家推荐介绍健康的生活方式。写作中注意使用连接词，要做到语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】短文多处用到高级句型和短语，增加文章的色彩，如“It is +adj. to do sth，stick to do sth”等；还自然的运用衔接词使文章读起来流畅自然，如“however，what’s more，as a result，thus，meanwhile”等；也使用序数词使文章条理清晰，如“first of all，finally”等，增加文章的亮点。
【考点】考查议论文写作