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假如你Dave,请根据表格信息介绍自己,可适发挥。
要求:语句通顺,语意连贯,语法正确。大约80词左右。
Name
Dave
Age
13
Appearance(外貌)
中等个子,偏瘦,黑色短发
Hobbies(爱好)
听音乐,打篮球 …
上周末活动
忙碌高兴
周六上午做作业;下午和父母开车去奶奶家 ……
上周日上午和朋友打篮球;下午听音乐……
My name is Dave. I’m 13.
 
 
 
 
答案My name is Dave. I’m 13.I’m of medium height and I’m a little thin . I have short black hair. I like singing. I also like playing basketball.
Last weekend, I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went there by car. On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading.
试题分析:这是一篇让小作者写自我介绍和上个周末的活动情况。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外,写作时,小作者还注意了语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。小作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的短语和句型,如On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading. 这些句子使文章添色不少。
考点:表格提纲类作文。