- 试题详情及答案解析
- 书面表达(共1小题:满分20分)
假如你是Zoe,是一名九年级学生,你内心有很多成长中的烦恼,所以你给青少年辅导员Lily写信,请求她帮忙。请根据要求完成一篇短文。
要求:1.非课业烦恼:体重、外貌、家庭条件等;
2.课业烦恼:至少从三方面写;
3.希望得到帮助。
注意:1.词数:90左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数:
2.非课业烦恼也可以自己写,但至少写三个方面;
3.可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
Dear Lily,
I'm a Grade 9 student. I have many worries.
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Yours,
Zoe- 答案:I like playing basketball very much. But I am too heavy and short to play it. And I have no much money to buy what I need: clothes, snacks, or gifts for my friends. And I don’t have many friends because I am a little quiet.
About study, I have some problems too. I used to have much time to relax. But now I have to study all the time. I am so tired. And I am not good at maths, my maths grade is becoming worse and worse. My parents are angry with my last test. But I tried my best. What can I do?
I am so tired and sad that I can’t sleep well. What should I do? Can you help me? - 试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.如: But I am too heavy and short to play it.我太胖太矮而不能打(篮球)。my maths grade is becoming worse and worse.我的数学成绩越来越差。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.
考点:提纲作文。