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书面表达。(15分)
在每个人的成长过程中,谁都有一些变化,请以“How I’ve Changed”为题,根据下列表格所给要点,写一篇短文,介绍你的过去与现在生活变化。
要点:1. 短文应包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯;
3. 字数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
4,文中不能出现自己的姓名,所在学校班级信息。
 
过去
现在
体貌特征
胖, 长卷发
瘦,短直发
性格
安静,沉默寡言
活跃,幽默
爱好
打电脑游戏
周末常和父母去看电影,有时和朋友出去旅游
学习
没兴趣,成绩差
努力学习,认真做作业,成绩有所提高
How I’ve Changed
My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
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答案:My life has changed a lot in the last few years。I used to be fat and have long carlv hair. But now I am thin and have long straight hair. In the past, I was quiet and often kept silently. now , I become active and humorous.and I have made many friends. I used to play computer games , but now I often go to movies with my parents on weekends,once in a while, I with my friends travel around. I had no interest in study so that I often got bad grades. but after I work hard for a long time. and do homework carefully, I have made great progress.
试题分析:本题是写一篇以我的改变为话题的书面表达,把自己的过去和现在作比较,在个人的外貌,性格特征和爱好等反面加以比较。介绍过去的个人情况用一般过去时,可用used to+动词原形这个句型,介绍变化后现在的情况用一般现在时,写作时应注重语言结构的通顺和流畅,避免使用错误的单词,句子和时态。
【亮点说明】本文注重不同时态的使用,灵活的运用一般过去时和一般现在时,尤其注意used to+动词原形这个句型的正确使用,同时在写作时把握了语言的连贯性和对比性,正确的使用不同的句型结构.
考点:提纲作文。