- 试题详情及答案解析
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今年是实施重庆森林工程的第二年。又到一年一度的植树节(Tree Planting Day)了,为了把重庆建设成一个森林城市、让环境更优美,作为一个中学生,你能做些什么。请写一份倡议书。 内容应包括:
1、积极参加植树活动。
2、爱护花草树木,不踩踏草坪(trample on the grass),不攀爬树枝。
3、保持校园干净卫生。
4、要节约水电,节约粮食,杜绝浪费。
5、回收(recycle)利用旧物。
要求:1、词数:80词左右;
2、不得写出自己的真实姓名和学校。
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____________________________________________________________________________- 答案:Dear students,
As we know,Tree Planting Day arrived again.In order to build Chongqing into a forest city and make the enviroment more beautiful,we teenagers should do his bit.
What should we do then? I think we should play a role in tree planting activities.We can do many things like planting trees,protecting trees and flowers.We shouldn’t trample on the grass or climb the trees.On the other hand,we should keep our school clean and tidy.We’d better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a bus.It is also important to save water and food.We shouldn’t waste anywhere.We’d better recycle the old things and ues them again.
If we can do those,we’ll make our city more beautiful. - 试题分析:这篇作文要求以城市建设,美化环境为主题,在学生中提出倡议,鼓励学生积极参加植树活动,爱护花草,不踩踏草地,不攀爬树枝,保持校园干净,节约水电粮食杜绝浪费,回收利用旧物等。提纲虽然已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者以植树节到来,我们青少年应该为城市美化尽自己一份力提出倡议,建议大家做一些力所能及的事情,这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如we should play a role in tree planting activities.It is also important to save water and food.We shouldn’t waste anywhere.We’d better recycle the old things and ues them again.等。
考点:提纲类作文。